Hello Norman,
First of all thank you for creating such a document and giving it to the community. As I started familiarizing myself with Genode about a month ago, your timing is impeccable :)
On 03/06/2015 04:22 PM, Norman Feske wrote:
I would greatly appreciate feedback from the community about those chapters - be it in the form of minor spelling or grammar fixes, suggestions for additional topics you wish to see covered, hints about misleading paragraphs, or any other concerns that you may have.
I have reviewed the entire document expect for the NOVA deferred page-fault handling section in the "Under the hood" chapter. Most changes are typo fixes and other minor stylistic corrections. Besides that I included some suggestions for alternative wording.
You can find the changes incorporated into the document in the review branch at [1]. Please let me know if you would like me to submit the changes in a different form (e.g. pull request) or make other adjustments.
Cheers, Adrian
[1] - https://github.com/codelabs-ch/genode-manual/tree/review