Documentation - request for feedback

[Norman Feske]

Hello Bob,

nice to see you after such a long time. I am happy about your feedback!

On 04/27/2015 06:47 AM, Nobody III wrote:
> I'm reading the documentation to get a better understanding of Genode. I
> am a native English speaker, and I like most of what I've read so far,
> however I have found a few errors. The most frequent error is incorrect
> punctuation (e.g. placing commas where they don't belong). Though this
> is a minor issue, it would be nice to get it fixed. I would do it myself
> as I read the documentation if I could edit the PDF.

The PDF is created from the document "source code" found here:

  https://github.com/nfeske/genode-manual

You can clone it as a regular Git repository:

  git clone https://github.com/nfeske/genode-manual.git

The textual content has the form of the plain text files in the manual/
subdirectory. If you have any fixes, you may edit those text files and
send me a diff. I am very thankful for such corrections. :-)

> The biggest error that I have come across so far is on page 44 of
> manual-2015-03-31: "Genode does hardly abstract from physical
> resources." You could change it to something like "Genode doesn't
> abstract from physical resources."

Thank you.

Norman

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