I'm reading the documentation to get a better understanding of Genode. I am a native English speaker, and I like most of what I've read so far, however I have found a few errors. The most frequent error is incorrect punctuation (e.g. placing commas where they don't belong). Though this is a minor issue, it would be nice to get it fixed. I would do it myself as I read the documentation if I could edit the PDF.
The biggest error that I have come across so far is on page 44 of manual-2015-03-31: "Genode does hardly abstract from physical resources." You could change it to something like "Genode doesn't abstract from physical resources."
Overall, I am impressed with the documentation. You clearly have a very good grasp of the English language--better than most people who speak English as their first language. The documentation is very enlightening. Thank you.

On Tue, Mar 31, 2015 at 5:20 PM, Norman Feske <norman.feske@...1...> wrote:
Hallo,

following up on our discussion one month ago, I have produced a new
version of the document:


http://genode.org/files/53bcb8e33fe6602fed25edc3c7b922c5/manual-2015-03-31.pdf

In the meanwhile, it received the following new chapters:

  2. Getting started
  5. Development
  7. Functional specification

Content-wise it covers what I originally had in mind. Only the
introduction is yet to be written and a few cross references are still
missing. Do you miss a specific topic or find any part of the document
too hard to swallow? Please let me know.

Cheers
Norman

On 03/06/2015 04:22 PM, Norman Feske wrote:
> Hello,
>
> according to our road map (http://genode.org/about/road-map), the
> upcoming Genode version 15.05 will be accompanied with comprehensive
> documentation. The work on this documentation is in full swing and can
> be tracked at the corresponding Git repository:
>
>   https://github.com/nfeske/genode-manual
>
> A snapshot of the current version is available as PDF at:
>
>
> http://genode.org/files/53bcb8e33fe6602fed25edc3c7b922c5/manual-2015-03-06.pdf
>
> So far, the work on the following chapters is completed already:
>
>   3. Architecture
>   4. Components
>   6. System configuration
>   8. Under the hood
>
> I would greatly appreciate feedback from the community about those
> chapters - be it in the form of minor spelling or grammar fixes,
> suggestions for additional topics you wish to see covered, hints about
> misleading paragraphs, or any other concerns that you may have.
>
> Cheers
> Norman


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